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Sorry the critiques are taking so long! partials I have typed up for everything, I just need to finish them haha> u < 

This is a cute picture! 'll start with technicalities first ~ The anatomy is pretty well done, the only thing And notice Is That the girl is a little thin proportionally-speaking, but not painfully so, so it's not a huge issue! The other things are That her left hand and the spoon she's holding is a little off, it looks more like the spoon should be pointing more to the right That backwards, and her right hand (while the proportions and details are gorgeous) does not look like it really has a grasp on the glass. All the details (on both the people and the ice cream) are gorgeous, though, and the technical errors are not all that major! 

The coloring and shading are very nice in this picture, I especially love that there's not a huge inconsistency in the colouring, and what is there is worked with extremely well, in a way that has it mesh with the shading~ Nice job! I'd also like to point out that the interactions between the two characters are very nice, you can see the expressions clearly and neither of them look detached from the other! ^_^